thanks. I usually go well on drums, and not so good on the rest of the song. Maybe a little more of pratice will help me out. Adding some effects on the drums would add a "heavier" feeling to it, I've done it on a music I did (but didn't submit it to newgrounds, it was a test).
My FL studio version isn't the paid one, so I can't save songs. That's frustrating. So I can see what people think I should improve, so I won't make the same things on my next song. If I find another music making software I might use it, or just get the paid version of FL somehow haha
About the intro, yeah, I could make it better, I didn't really like the way it turned out.