Mroe Variations in the melodic Line

Hey this peice was off to a great start...im likin the melody it is deifferent but it was never expanded on and taken as far as it could have been feeling very repetative aftr a certain point around 1:50 to 2:45. and that section around 1:50 to 2:45 did not feel like a variation it felt like all you did was remove the percussion and that revealed how weak the melody had gotten by that time in the song. Start by expanding the melodic line and the scores should go up.
=] potential!!!

Nice Man..

I love it :) Great work you've done here, Wouldn't mind knowing what you use to make these and where u got it >.< lol... I've always wanted to make some trance music and other things in the electronica category :) Help me find whatever you're using ^_^ lol

-Thanks and Good Job

SHIT YEAH!

the beginning really lead into the drum intro.

the drums couldhave been a little bit harder, and with some really hard bass, but DAMN
u did a good job!

its really different, yet familliar.

I love the organ thingie with the new drums near the end.

and u did pretty damn good with the transitions.
(nice kick at the end)

i fucking love the end!

DAMN good job!
your best one yet

NeMiSiS

All my 5 ar3 bel0ng to th1s

GJ BRO

nice music bro keep it up