Mroe Variations in the melodic Line
Hey this peice was off to a great start...im likin the melody it is deifferent but it was never expanded on and taken as far as it could have been feeling very repetative aftr a certain point around 1:50 to 2:45. and that section around 1:50 to 2:45 did not feel like a variation it felt like all you did was remove the percussion and that revealed how weak the melody had gotten by that time in the song. Start by expanding the melodic line and the scores should go up.
When it was made, I was an uber newb. Audio Search Pandora_Tranquil. He did a remix of this thats pretty good, given the source material especially.
Nothing will ever be done with my music on here anymore, waste of time. But I like to see the random reviews it still gets :)
Thanks for the time to listen and crit. Appreciate it.
I love it :) Great work you've done here, Wouldn't mind knowing what you use to make these and where u got it >.< lol... I've always wanted to make some trance music and other things in the electronica category :) Help me find whatever you're using ^_^ lol
-Thanks and Good Job
Thanks for the review.
If you want to know what I use, and where to get it I'll be happy to tell you. Email me at email@example.com or firstname.lastname@example.org and I'll help ya with a bunch of things and help ya get started. You can add my man from that hotmail and I'll take ya step by step through some of the simple things. Have fun and I hope to hear from ya soon. Again, thanks for the review.
(Sorry I didn't reply sooner, I rarely check in on these old songs)
the beginning really lead into the drum intro.
the drums couldhave been a little bit harder, and with some really hard bass, but DAMN
u did a good job!
its really different, yet familliar.
I love the organ thingie with the new drums near the end.
and u did pretty damn good with the transitions.
(nice kick at the end)
i fucking love the end!
DAMN good job!
your best one yet
All my 5 ar3 bel0ng to th1s
I'm glad you liked it!
The ending yes! I love when endings are as smooth as this. The timing is freaking perfect with the beats! I love it!
Thanks for the review.
nice music bro keep it up
Thanks. Try my other tracks if you like this one =D