Acid and rap? Very bold. Take the acid melody and dim it down, up the tempo and emphasize the easy-day jumpiness you have going on here--throw the beat around. (FL, right? :>) It's generally bad practice to carry a song on the strength of the melody alone, and an acid one is riské to begin with.
Ask me for more advice and happy jammin'.
heh i like risky ;) ill hit u up