Just Do it

Alright so you wanna know whats going on in here eh? A few things off the bat, the intro was good, i like the tribal drums and dark mood you create there, though you go into this odd kinda of techno lead that keeps repeating...that needs a bit more progression after it, a good rule of thumb for techno is add a change every 4 bars ;) breaks it up nicely. This song has a kind of This Morn Omina feel check them out, you have a similar kinda style. Also Add more OOMPH to your kicks they sound flat and kinda like they don't want to drive the song. All around decent production going on and a small tweak here and there. ALSO before i forget that lead synth you have going on layer another synth over top of it with the same pattern add a bif of delay to it and i can promise it will bring the song out more ;)

Well let me see here...

I'm writing this as I listen to the song the first time through. I always feel that is the most objective way to give feedback.

I like the intro, simple as it is. It has a nice flavor to it, rich and dark. Kinda how I like my women! ;-)

I'm definitely feeling this techno groove, with the pads and such in the beginning. I really like the beat starting around the 2:00 mark. And the "melody", if that truly is a melody, fades out nicely. Very nice touch there.

Oh and this new beat that arises kinda out of nowhere is simply groovy. Only problem is, its only a beat. Try to do a little more there. The 3:00ish change back to the "melody" is very cool. Oh and the nifty beat comes back at the 4:00ish mark. Its growing...growing...still growing...I'm still listening...I'm getting excited...And it fades out...DON'T DO THAT!!!

Fade outs at the end of songs are cheap ways out of writing a real ending. Other than that, the song is great. But please write an ending to the song. Fade outs most of the time are used, because people either can't or are to lazy to write an ending. Give me a big splash at the end with everything punching me in the face at once. That would be very fitting.

7/10 bud. Because the ending is the last thing someone hears of your song. So its rather important. But other than that nicely done. One nifty little groove you wrote here.

-Gravey-

industrial

definitely industrial. not to my liking. also very repetitive.