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The boy that was alone(demo A)

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well i am uploading this to see what newgrounds thinks about it, it is background music for an animated comic. the rythm changes at the different scenes
i am not sure how long the animation will take becasue this is my second attempt at animating

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disagreed

I like the bells at times. also the quarter note progression near the end was very interesting, but i couldnt tell when the melody started and when it repeated itself. the only problem with the bells is the amount of dischord they add. its ok sometimes, but other times its just so off, that it really needs changed. add more elements to it as well. some percussion, other than bells would be useful, and other instruments as well. as far as a melody this could be a kind of creepy song, if done right. you could be on the right track. version 2.0 in the future?

scraggly521 responds:

thanks for the tips and yes there will be a 2.0 this is just a demo just needed some opinions.

O boy

Man, those high bells need to go. They're ear piercing. Just to heavy on the attack for those pitches. Also, I'm not particularly liking that constant quarter note melody later in the song. The guitar is okay earlier, although the note progression could use being changed. Keep working on this and I'm sure you can make it good.

scraggly521 responds:

yea i am working hard i am trying to animate for the firs time also its quite difficult

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scraggly521
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Uploaded
Jan 12, 2009
12:01 AM EST
Genre
Ambient
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1 MB
55 sec

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