I don't know what to tell you
I think it sounds fine as it is. It tapers off rather than abruptly stop so the end is good. In my opinion I wouldn't make it any longer.
ehhh man.. this is heavy metal?? this is soft... and the guittar playing at second 44 dont change it at all.. give more energy at the beginning.. more instruments.. it is too short too.. 2mins?? come on.. give more attention to the guittar.. like the one u give at the second 44.. maybe that can improve it.. so it is a 4 if u want to make heavy metal.. and a 7 if u try to make calm song ^^U
Calm, but with a very emotional sense i think :p
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