This is the first song i've ever made...criticism very welcome...
OH man not bad!
You just need a bit more kick at the key points like a transition kick. Something to thrust the listener into the next phase of the song,otherwise the mind,even if not,will view it as repetitive.
But I love this.It's like DnB rock-JUST WHAT I ALWAYS WANTED!
Heh thanks for the review =) I haven't actually worked on it since I posted it here but yea I definitely agree with you and i'm going to go and tweak it now...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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