Not too bad. I think it would work well as background music to something if you toned down the heavy beat, smoothed out some of the cuts to different sections (ex. from the low/mid section to high sparkly stuff), and of course - fix the loop so it doesn't sound like a speed bump.
Really dig the choir. Wish I had good choir sounds. What equipment you using for them?
Yea I admit it still needs some work.
I use Magix Music Maker 11.
I need to throw into sound booth to fix highs and mids , and I agree I do need to fix the loop a bit.
thanks for the helpful critique