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MH16: MAC9

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Here's my newest song! :-)
I hope it will do well in the MAC9, but i don't think this is going to end high in the ranking.
Please rate & review.


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you've got a start

but kinda slow, chop some repetitiveness increase the speed pregression and by that you will also take monotony away, the bass could create a more complex rhythm but it was used in a simple way...

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the suggestions (and the review of course :P)

hmmm (by the way i'm judging)

reptitive bass line with basses. Good use of oriental sound. No use of dynamics. Length. Works well in loops. Lack of a climax. Addition of ocarina is nice. Overall its okay, nothing spectacular. Keep it up though, i can tell you just began. YOu have great potential.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the critical but honest review! :-)
And thanks for the compliment :P



Let's see...lots of short and long strings playing. nice melody, good rythmn. I miss some climax in this song as well as some variation in instruments. the flute near the end is a nice idea but so late. I'd suggest to add some kind of drums, too. Add some dynamics as gOrc said.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the review and the advice! :-)


Your Work is soooooo good

Y did i miss this one it's lush and it's all really well thought out.
There's not a lot going on and that works so well for this piece, its clear and resounding.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks! :D

nicely done

I really like string compositions and this is a very calming one. I like the arrangement of the strings as well as their different lines, but it ended way to early so the flutes at the end are getting lost a little bit.
You could make this hole piece longer and more dynamic (getting louder, slower, faster, harmony change...) and add a bit reverb maybe.
It really has potential, but needs some more work!

FairSquare responds:

I'm just a beginner :P
But thanks for your review, i'll definatly try to make this track better.
I appreciate it :-)


Credits & Info


4.42 / 5.00

Jan 10, 2009
8:27 AM EST
File Info
4.8 MB
2 min 6 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.