It does sound like a video game song, like a boss battle. I also suggest if you're making Dance, don't use a snare for that purpose. Use a clap.
Also, this song does get repetitive. And if you're using a Soundgoodizer, don't. If you're using a Limiter, you've got the ceiling too low.
The song went too long then it should have. It shoulda stopped at 1:50.
You still need A LOT of work, but you are getting better.
You make music then i listen to it :> :> :> double lolio watbag
Sound like a last boss battle. Keep the retro music coming! ;)
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