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Feb 16, 2005 | 5:30 PM EST
File Info
1.9 MB
2 min 5 sec
3.20 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.20 / 5 stars
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soothing little song i made. Listen to the whole thing before U decide U dont like it.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good sounds, strange organization

I have to agree with King Bastard, the drums were pretty tight. But he makes the mistake to say that the instruments dont sound right. they themselves sound fine with the style of beat and such, the problem lies in the melody. you have 2-3 melodies created, but none of them gel together, they're just fighting for attention. try to decide which one is the lead synth, backup (not as complicated) and a bass (to hold common notes together). Just work with those elements, and keep up with the drums and making them more complex but beat holding (always a hard challenge) good luck my friend


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like the drums.

They could do with changing more though. I'm not too keen on the sounds/instruments and melodies you've chosen, they do the simple electro beats no justice. It needs more to it. Some nice atmospheric pads should add some depth. Shame, cos I really like the drums at the start and was hoping for something better, but u r only young and I wish I was writing and experimenting with stuff like this at your age, so keep on creating. I didn't start writing tunes till I was 19!

Shadoman111 responds:

Thanks for the reveiw and the tips ill qork on my songs a little bit more. ive listened to most of your songs and theyre good i wish i could make them like that.