gorram good!

but the quotes are from Serenity (the movie not the pilot), and Wash died in that movie

its good.

but not GREAT.
great composure and skill, but could use better EQ and more professional-sounding instruments.
btw, it should be.
pps. be sure to check out my other music =P

Great use of piano.

Great use of piano and general melody here. The distortion that add's in (The hard drums) kinda takes away from the piano however it does add its own sound so thats not a bad thing. It gives you room to transition into other melodies and such. The Vox in this is rather interesting and helps to tell the story of this song for sure. Over all i'd say you did a pretty good job.

Wyldfyre1

Well done

I loved this especially as a fan of the show!!
Almost brought me to tears !! ^-^

But while i think the distorted drums actually complimented the clear instrumentation
as you intended, i feel the drums are a bit over powering, tone them down perhaps?

Overall a beautiful piece!! Loved it!! Favorites!!

Sweetsome

Great mix and the voices were an awesome addition.
The drums are pretty cool mixed in with the soft instrumental.
Very good job.