It was ok...
Song was a little off beat, but it was ok. some of the instrument choices you made for this weren't the best, and there were a bit too many pauses. The music itself isn't that bad, just instrument choice, timing, placement... Beginning is a bit weird, and then the kick, clap thing is also weird, but at like 20 seconds, the beat begins to become ok. just unoriginal instrument choices. Also the song doesn't seem connected together, just mini songs all mashed into one clump with lots of repetitiveness and space inbetween.
If you want to make better songs, I suggest finding some samples a drum beat or something online... also, try having one main beat to the song, not little beats that are repetitive and don't mix well together. hope my review was good for you.
@ aaron425692: if you want to rate that low, at least explain why you rated that way, just don't say "uhh it sounds weird" and rate a two...
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