it's really cool!

i like the melody!

For effort 4/5
Easy to listen to 5/5
Nice melody 5/5
Kick 3/5
creativity 5/5

4.5/5 = 5/5
Helth

gj on this .. i really mean this is good!

Left to Shine for us.

There is definitely some emotion in this music and you projected it from the beginning to the end.

I immediately sensed something warm about this track and the idea of moving through heavenly happy golden space. It's quite pleasant to listen to, and is filled with a sense of hope and spirit.

It is clearly a mix of dance with the layer {on the opening which sounds really soothing} creating a backing of trance. You've got drums which complement it nicely although the synth sounds a little screechy on the ears, especially at the end {4:30 +} when, with the drums added, just make it sound very distorted.

It's okayish. I wouldn't put it on a playlist because it isn't particularly clean as I've mentioned above with the synth. Although I find it a little flowing, the river of music you generate is just too cloggy.

But it's a good effort and I sense your heart in it. I hope your special person sees it too.

* * * * * * { 6 - 10 } - "Sweet"

lucky person

lucky person.... very nice...
but if anything kick might be a bit to heavy..
still 10's 5's