I agree with the others
With a bit of work this song could make it to the top. Keep working at it!
A bit minimalistic, and it kind of falls apart at 1 minute, but the intro part isn't horrible. Those are some nice bells
I am a fan of mythology, I say this song could need some improve. For example, the beats are off and don't match with the current song. Just put in a few tweaks here and there, adjustments here and there, this and that, and your song should be much better.