Overall, good.
The pauses, like at 00:42 and 02:37 are too much. What you are going for it good, but it interrupts the flow of the music. I like the sustain pedal feel starting at 01:29; that whole section I really like.
Author Comments
This is my first legitimately lengthy song ever, and is essentially an extended version of my previous submission, "a long road."
This song was inspired by having to leave the person that I love the most.
Such a thing makes for a very long journey.
DigitalTide responds:
Thanks for the critique man. I think I fixed both of the things you mentioned, give it another listen and see what you think. Thanks!
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