The pauses, like at 00:42 and 02:37 are too much. What you are going for it good, but it interrupts the flow of the music. I like the sustain pedal feel starting at 01:29; that whole section I really like.
Thanks for the critique man. I think I fixed both of the things you mentioned, give it another listen and see what you think. Thanks!
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