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Considering how little time and effort i put in

i really like it


still trying to upload my best beat yet but it's just too big

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oh my god

motherfucker this is ill not sick and you ok but this beat sick

Two-Shekel responds:

Hell yeah

Overall, a very good simple beat.

But I don't like bassline. It doesn't sound good at all.

Furthermore, you leave a lot of room for buildup in this song. Maybe that wasn't what you were going for, but if you wanted to, you could put higher tuned staccatos on this song and really FIRE IT UP! And you could enhance the drumbeat to something crazy at that point, make a monstrous chorus at that point.

I guess my main qualm with this song is that it lacks energy even though it sounds very tense.

But those staccatos really sound diesel, where'd you get those?

And you won't mind informing me when you upload your best beat, will you? I really wanna hear it, see if it inspires me to start rapping again.

Two-Shekel responds:

thx for the advice man

i know what your talking about, but that problem i got with that is that ur lookin for a different type of beat than this really is

ur lookin for like some "lose yourself" type thing where it gets crazier and crazier

this is more for me like a laid back DRE type joint

as for the bass-line tho i'm interested in what you think would make it better


good track

it is a really simple, but nice song

Current Score
3.46 / 5.00 (+ 0.18)

Two-Shekel responds:

thx man

I like it

enjoyable, simple and with a clean ending. if only life was like this song

Two-Shekel responds:

ha ha

great review

Credits & Info


Waiting for 5 more votes

Jan 7, 2009
7:32 PM EST
File Info
1.4 MB
1 min 12 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.