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Strange Story

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I don't think it's that bad but you guys will probably hate it :P
but whatever

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(Sorry for the low review)

Like I said, sorry for the low score on the review. I just didn't really like this submission too much. Again, not to be rude, but it sounds like what my roommate use to do on his guitar when he was drunk and just randomly strummed on the guitar.

It basically sounded like it didn't have any structure to it whatsoever. Just like you picked up the guitar and you didn't know what you were going to play, but you played it anyway. That isn't always a bad thing, but I don't think it was too good this time around.

I do think one thing could have made this submission pretty good though and that would be lyrics. I know you've heard this already in your other reviews, but it's what really would make this submission good. (Sorry I'm not good with coming up lyrics so I can't help you there too much)

When I hear this song I think of something like Sublime or some other band who usually have relaxing songs. Perhaps add a little bit of drums to the song or another instrument if you can too.

Overall - I personally didn't like it, but it doesn't really mean that it was bad. Just kind of empty and plain for my tastes. Keep working hard though.

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wasn't bad...

in fact i like it, was different, the idea of the strange story really fits well, the guitar (i think it's a guitar, right?) was nice, has a good rhythm but it doesn't sound as usual, i can imagine an old farmer singing the a song with the guitar... wish it had vocals, it really needs it
it was a little long and when it gets quiet i wasn't sure if it already finished, i wish the silence between the part was a little smaller, even with all that, it want' bad, was very nice

link3657 responds:

thanks for the review!
yes it is a guitar
if you can think of some lyrics PM me and I can put them into the song
and the quiet part...I accidentally hit my volume nob and just went with it :P

I like.

Not great quality. Aesthetically pleasing chords, and it sounded pretty great. Chord progression was a little off, need to make it flow better - altogether I liked it. Keep up the good work.

Kind regards -

Needs moar cowbell!

Ya, vocals would be pretty sweet. Pretty cool sound, even if a lot of it is simply alternating chords lol. It is pretty cool though. Good job

link3657 responds:

why thank you good sir!
my next song will include vocals once I can figure out some lyrics :P
and I don't have a cowbell :(

Hate it?

Why would we hate it man? its a good song. only thing i would add to it are some lyrics. Other wise good job. Sorry for lowering your perfect score of 5 but ive got to be hounest

link3657 responds:

it's no big deal about lowering the score :P
there aren't any lyrics because I was just fooling around while recording stuff and to be honest I don't think I could play this again because I forgot how to XD
I'll try to figure out some lyrics though and then I'll upload another copy of it

Credits & Info


3.60 / 5.00

Jan 7, 2009
2:30 PM EST
File Info
5.9 MB
6 min 30 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.