Nice little loop you got here man. Nice to see you have a good grasp of electronica music too man, it definetly shows with your creative EQing and meshing of different drum ideas :) I really like the radioesque, crunchy soundy drums that are layed in front of the other rhythm, kind of reminds of me of one of those pieces where a singer would beatbox with the drummer while he wasnt singing. The wooden "clack" sounds that go with the background were a real cool touch too. Pad was nice, sounds drug induced haha. The vintage sounding arp near the end doesnt add really anything to the piece, considering nothing was built upon that idea but maybe your just transitioning into a second part who nows.
It was a refreshing loop shizeet, I would like to see more made out of it because I see this piece has potential. Another criticism was that it didnt feel really full, maybe throw in an abstract bassline inand eventually maybe some metallic higher register percussion to play 8th or 16th notes to help move the piece along in an energetic manner.