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[LY] .-- Tempered Grace --'

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Back with a new song. I'm getting quite the hang of it now, if I may say so myself.

This one has a funny story to it; a friend came to me the other day and challenged me to make a full song in one day. I succeeded, I got the track done in the same day and let him listen to it, he was satisfied. But I was not. I told him how I would rather continue with the song, rather than finish it the way it was. He smiled, we called it a draw.

So a few days of remastering later, I bring you these 3 minutes of bassy goodness! I know the overall volume is kind of soft, if you've read HalcyonicFalconX's topic about the 'anti-loudness war', you will know why: It saves quality. SO, before you listen, TURN UP THE SPEAKERS. I guarantee that it's worth your while, the difference is huge!

Please rate and comment! I love to read your reviews and will respond to each one. Fav if you'd like to keep an update on new song releases. :)

~ La_Yinn, --'

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Sick bass line!

Really liking this, I love the starting bass line, and the bass line throughout the whole thing. The drum beat's really good aswell, though I'm not sure about the tone...but other reviewers have said that so I know you already know about that :).

I'm just getting into this kind of techno style stuff, and this is a really great example, and I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it.

If I were to edit it, all I would change is the drum sounds, and probably add a few more lead lines, but that's because I'm a guitarist xD.

9/10, very very good song

la-yinn responds:

wewt, glad you liked it. ^_^

I'm thinking of redoing the song at one point. I'm more experienced now, better samples etc etc. (The usual excuse. XD)

Thanks for the review!

happy sound

yeah,i like this,nice and jumpy

Nice

A really nice tune, but the drums kind of ruin it. They sound so 'flat' and lifeless. Maybe some new drum samples?

Otherwise, really nice work.

la-yinn responds:

I agree, the drums are pretty bad. I got new samples nowadays though, so I've learned from this mistake. :p

Thanks for the review!

Great job.

I enjoyed listening to this submission. It was pretty relaxing and just generally a fun submission to listen to. I thought that it was very simple, but you got it to work for you as it sounded great while not being too cluttered or anything like that. It wasn't too simple either as it wasn't too repetitive or boring. I think you found the happy medium with this song. Perhaps a couple of vocals would make this submission sound a lot better.

Overall - I can't really think of anything to make this much better than it was. Pretty good job all around. Keep up the good work.

~ Review Request Club ~

la-yinn responds:

Oi, vocals? :O Well I don't have the slightest clue on where to add vocals and I don't even have a mic atm, but I guess I could try it out sometime. :)

Thanks for the review!

its nice but..

you kick man, try experimenting with sample packs that have real punchy kicks

hats are all good though

its pretty chill, but being a dance song, i expect it to have like an awesome climax, and it just doesnt have anything like that, it sorta just is the same beat, without much change, you know?

overall, its ok, but it has some missing elements that would make it amazing

la-yinn responds:

It's funny how it's the other way around with me. :P

I don't really like the hats, but think the solid short kick suits this piece. :f

I tried to give it some sort of climax with the double claps, I guess I could've added another pattern to give it some more depth.

Thanks for the review!

Credits & Info

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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
13
Score
4.42 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 7, 2009
1:56 AM EST
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
4.1 MB
2 min 59 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.