I feel like I am in the court of the Crimson King.
I think that you and I are much alike, if you don't mind me saying so. We both struggle to produce pleasant noises with our aging synthesizer, we both have trouble deciding on which genre to switch to, and we both like interupting our songs with funny noises.
Having said that, you seem to grasp the concept of harmonics to a greater extent than I, and for that I have much respect.
I would suggest that you make more of the harmony just after the intro, when the strings come in to begin with, that is good stuff.