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Not much changed on this remastering, but enough to make it better. :D
(thanks to all the reviewers on the old submission, you made this song better)

Ok, this is a little recording I made on one of my voyages working on a container ship. An especially FUCKED UP and long voyage (4 months). Lots of anger, lots of doubts, quite simple song.
Enjoy! Here are the lyrics:

I can't remember the day I arrived.
I just remember I was full of fear.
All was new, the people were strange.
All turned old, the people turned away.
What the hell was I thinking
What happened to all my dreams
I need to find someone to blame
To ease my mental pain

(Pre-Chorus):
How long have I stayed here
How long til I disappear
How long have I stared at the sea
How long till I am free

Too Long. (x4)

You can't imagine how hard I tried
To stay sober - it worked for a while
To endure this reality
You have to drink, to keep your sanity
Everyday is always the same;
Wake up, work and fall asleep
My hands ache and are full of scars
I can hardly play my guitar

(Pre-Chorus)

Too Long. (x4)

Is there a way to escape from hell? (x3)
Is there a way to escape from this hell hole?
YES.
To escape from this hell hole
YES.

FUCK YOU. I'M GOING HOME.

Reviews


Okay.

I like your sound but the song is pretty repetitive, I also have to agree with most of the people here, I didn't like the vocals.
You sound like you have a lot of untapped potential, keep working at it. Try exploring different things, the sound is good but you should try different angles and see what best taps that potential.


CWN responds:

I can agree to this.
The vocals on this song are not my favorite, I've done a lot better in a lot of different songs.


Hit me like a fat chick falling 20 storys on me.

Music's pretty bad ass definately has potential.

BUT GET RID OF YOUR FUCKING VOCALS!!! My god thats the worst metal vocals I've heard in a looooong time.

Seriously, get rid of the vocals and you guys might actually get somewhere.


CWN responds:

lol
There are no guys. Just me. And my vocals are the best metal vocals i know.


metal XD $__$

awsome :D


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CWN responds:

METAL!


Sw33t

Hey man well done. Its sweet the vocals are a little wierd at some points but, awsome job with the instrumental.



You had me 00:1

And I stayed, but the vocals... kind of sucked. Needs more tuning.


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CWN

CWN

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Jan 5, 2009
9:54 AM EST
Genre
Heavy Metal
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5 MB
3 min 16 sec

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