!! Too Long !!

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Not much changed on this remastering, but enough to make it better. :D
(thanks to all the reviewers on the old submission, you made this song better)

Ok, this is a little recording I made on one of my voyages working on a container ship. An especially FUCKED UP and long voyage (4 months). Lots of anger, lots of doubts, quite simple song.
Enjoy! Here are the lyrics:

I can't remember the day I arrived.
I just remember I was full of fear.
All was new, the people were strange.
All turned old, the people turned away.
What the hell was I thinking
What happened to all my dreams
I need to find someone to blame
To ease my mental pain

How long have I stayed here
How long til I disappear
How long have I stared at the sea
How long till I am free

Too Long. (x4)

You can't imagine how hard I tried
To stay sober - it worked for a while
To endure this reality
You have to drink, to keep your sanity
Everyday is always the same;
Wake up, work and fall asleep
My hands ache and are full of scars
I can hardly play my guitar


Too Long. (x4)

Is there a way to escape from hell? (x3)
Is there a way to escape from this hell hole?
To escape from this hell hole



gratz bro

good song. it deserves front page.

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CWN responds:

Thanks man!
Glad to see you're back!

Awesome music but

The guitar, bass and drums are awesome, the only thing i dont like are the vocals.
I would also add a short guitar solo ^^.
Great work

CWN responds:

Never! Solos just confuse people. lol


that was pretty good but the scrams could use a little work but otherwise it was a great song so work on the vocals i hope you make more songs

CWN responds:

Yup. Screams need work.
Check out my other stuff, the screams are better there :P

i liked it but

there is only 2 small problems i liked the grunts but the shouted parts did not sound right for the songs. and i sat there through the song waiting for a fucking great solo but it was not there. as i said it was great and i hope to see you come out with some more great songs. \M/

CWN responds:

I'm not the solo kinda guy. Shouts sound weird i know. Couldn't be bothered to record them again :D


I cant say how rediculous "cookie-monster" vocals sound. The rest of the song is ok, but very redundant and lacking any big bridge outside of the vocal changes. Metal needs some mind melting solo or something. It just lacked for me.

CWN responds:

Beauty lies in the eye of the beholder.
You may not like em, but i sure do, and a lot of other people. And metal does NOT need a solo to make it good, there is other metal besides dragonforce.

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4.11 / 5.00

Jan 5, 2009
9:54 AM EST
Heavy Metal
File Info
5 MB
3 min 16 sec

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