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[AriA] Aspiration {WIP}

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Author Comments

Hey Newgrounds! This is my current project, inspired by hope, fun, just being stupid, and a new year!
I think you guy will like it =] I hope at least lol.

Keep in mind though, i haven't been making music for a long time. (Say 2 months now?) So be generous =]

But anyway, stats!

140 BPM
37 Patterns
19 Automation Clips
7 Recorded Knobs
29 Channels
25 Mixer Channels
31 Mixer Effects

EnjoY!

PLEASE Review/ Vote / Download!

- Always Yours -
- AriA -

EDIT: (Jan. 2. 2009) Just upped the bass and kick a bit =] Enjoy!
EDIT: (Jan. 2. 2009) Again, a few minor changes.
EDIT: (Jan. 3. 2009) Bigger changes again, messed around w/ melody and changed bass n kick.
EDIT: (Jan. 4. 2009) Finished song, but still minor changes to possibly make based on user feedback.

Reviews


A Little Late!

Hey, sorry about reviewing this one so late. Anyways, this one is really catchy. The melody doesn't change much but It doesn't really have to, you seem to be influenced by F-777/Basshunter. Unlike the guy below I really enjoyed the bassline, and I think you achieved the effect you wanted. (Loud, Danceable, Crazy etc.)

Your transition skills are awesome, wish mine were as smooth as your's. The only thing I would complain about are the vocal samples thrown in there, now there is nothing wrong with using them. I just recommend using external ones not included in FL or something. It makes you sound that much better/professionnal when the listener can't tell what program you produced with.

Then again, I only think FL users would really notice anyways. Overall a great dance track you have here man, just wish it were longer.

5/5
9/10


IndieDance responds:

haha alrighty, thanks =]


uh.

ok so theres a couple of things wrong with this.
btw im just saying this to help you improve and to be a better artist, im not trying to start a internet flame war or anything.

1. your buildup on the intro was too generic. i mean like, volume buildup?
the claps really annoying too, you introduce it way too soon. I would try to change that buildup by introducing stuff 1by 1, example, pad cutoff intro, piano intro cutoff, lead intro, add in some hats w/ bass, and then do a 1-2bar pause and then let it all jump out, add in a clap after 1 repetition after the pause.

2. your breakdown transition was good, but after that it kinda died. it wasnt really a breakdown, just a more mellow version of the melody. at your breakdown you need to make a piano, pad, bells, something calm.

3. master, and eq your hats + leads more pls

for 2 months, this is pretty good though.
im giving you a 5 and an 8,
greets
enkore

4.07 / 5.00 (+ 0.075)


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IndieDance responds:

good advice, ill try it, thanks! =]


Yo Mamma

Stop making music and go to Jewel with mom... But junk food song! So yunmmy!!!


IndieDance responds:

lmao


Good dance song.

I love the reverb in the song for most of the sounds. It's definitely a great tune. It sticks out a little from the norm. I usually steer from this genre, but since before... I've given myself a more open mind to music. And only making music for 2 months? This is some high quality song for only doing 2 months of music making. Nice work! :D


IndieDance responds:

thanks! =] i love hearing that lol. but yeah, only 2 months =]. i wonder where i will be in a few years Oo.

glad you liked it though =] (dance is always a nice genre to get hooked on xD )


Great

has a great flowing sound to it, not really much to change, other than the 9 second pause at the end lol
but anyways great job


IndieDance responds:

lol, i don't know why that's there....
hm, w\e too lazy to figure it out xD. i think i'll just leave it ^^

anyway, thanks =]

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Credits & Info

IndieDance
Author

Listens
1,095
Downloads
79
Votes
76
Score
4.34 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 4, 2009
9:50 AM EST
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
7.6 MB
3 min 18 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.