Alright theres not much more to say that hasn't already been said. I wish i had better headphones to listen to this stuff at work with but unfortuanatly i got a ear bud in one ear so ill do my best at reviewing this.
A) The intro seemed to have alot of dead space at the beginning but then again could have been the headphones.
B) I'm not to sure if this is classified as industrial more so than a classical or maybe Neo Classical ( I know im going out on a limb with that one)
c) As for track flow it moved nicely everything seemed to fall into place and nothing seemed "off" so to speak in the song. Your levels were good and the production quality was up there.
D) and finally add more of an outro, either like what donald said or add a soft drone to end it off with. Good work ill give you a 10 for this piece.