Ok, up till 1:13 the song is decent. The starting sounds are cool, same with the stuff that comes in at 0:50 (although they need to be toned down a little, its too far from the starting sound as Meonly70 said). The drum effect sounds bad, I suggest getting a better effect for it. Anways, that part sums up as decent, but after that it just gets fucked, I don't even follow it. Too weird for me.
i didnt get greatness
this song needs alot of work. the levels are all off, are you clipping at all. some arps in the bg would be nice and change the annoying lead sound :D
was this all computer generated or do you play any instruments
Try a new transitions for the song, like an Automation and try a higher pitched noise with a different beat, because the beat you have after 0:50 does not go good with the strings in the beginning.
I am just giving an opinion.