the main melody doesnt change that much which this song is potentially a good song, but it needs alot of work, and much more added melodies so it does become dull after hearing it too long. Also the beginning is slow, but I think you tried to implement a buildup on it.
As for the guy with the drum comment, just download DSK DrumZ and start using that program for ur drum synth, it'll sound a whole lot better then the drum synth that FL has given you. Also, there is certain high-hat synth that will work in song with FL's stock high hats, but u'll have to figure out that for yourself.
anyway, good luck in the future.
Well, it's not too bad. It could use some work. Bells are very loud and annoying! And tweak your drums. Make them sound different from the stock FL drums!