You didnt acytually make all of this, you stole the techno loop from Beatspitta which was originaly called Disturbed
The begining was very good, I almost downloaded it. But the second the vocals showed up, I had to stop. Sorry dude but vocals of that kind do not belong in Techno music, so unless you make it the exact same again without vocals I will download it immediatly (and I'm sure many others will too) Once again I am sorry, I tried to zone out the vocals but they were just too strong and dominant.
So just keep that in mind, Vocals are okay for ambience in the begining if keep down and under control. But if they are louder than the actual beat of the music and have no real purpose other than to be there for the sake of it, then it really affects it.
Ya i figured that the first time a herd it all the way threw. The vocals do go good with it, i just forgot to make it start out quite. i won't make that mistake with my next one.