Nice job!
I like the way the beginning is "out front" or how you call it :P
Very nice job, but as TestSubjectA said, at some times the sound is a bit too "out front".
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Intense instruments and equally intense effects. The sounds vary and the mood of the track is consistent.
I created this song for my last album "Total Euphoria", 2004-ish.
just a few things
i like the dirtiness of it, but maybe open up the mixer and do some twinking, the melody especially at 00:55 is really kinda ear piercing, i'd turn it down some. Also try some chords, it's tonic, third, and then fifth, a minor is a step and a half down. So D Major chord is D F# A, its complimenting minor chord would be B D F#. I apologize if it seems like i'm speaking down to you :d just i didn't hear any chords.
keep it up 7/10 3/5
B-e-t-a responds:
Hey thanks. I really appeciate this type of criticism. It is something I have a hard time finding in my area.
After reading your response, I have a whole new perspective on the track. The sounds are all in the red zone in places, admittedly.
If I can find the old loop files and my FLstudio I am now motovated to fix this track once and for good. Might inspire me to making music again, :)
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