o_o ummm... yeesh.
To be honest, I skipped ahead a bit to see if anything was worth listening to and I caught the chorus. Oh my. ._.
It sounds like the piano line and the vox line are fighting for attention which is *not* good no matter what you're doing. The beauty of the original is that you hardly pay attention to the guitar and it makes great, simple backing, not a prominent out-there feature.
I agree to what Surdu said, other that that problem, everything else is great.
It's definitely good.
To make it better, make sure the piano is turned down and that the vocal section is sync'd up properly with the piano. its just a smidge off
but I must say that the piano is a bit to loud.
Not bad but i'd love to hear more of the vocals into the song..
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