Not bad,But is lacking.
Its not a bad tune, but I find it lacking in some areas.The harmony with the two guitars in the beginning and later on didnt sound right to me.I just felt that the notes kinda clashed against eachother as if they were a half a note too sharp/flat etc.
That and I felt your solo had too many hammer ons.I think it would be better if you did some sliding and moved around for some variety.
But other than that, I gotta say that I liked the chords you used.They produce the majority of the 'mellow' of the song, so I wouldnt change them if you ever update the song in the future.
Well thats all I can say for this song.
As for you, keep practicing.You have potential.