I have not reviewed a hip hop song for a very long time which led me to listen to your song. So, you just started learning fl studio 7? If so, your on the right track with the instruments. I'm no expert for critiquing hip hop, but maybe keeping your piano in key would help. Just a hunch, but are you playing C D E F with the piano? Maybe your theme is in a minor key so a major key piano won't fit too well.
I like that errie haunting instrument. Makes the song sound quite creepy if that's what you were attempting.
According to your description, it seems like this song is only a rough draft so maybe all I said you already knew. If your still working on this song than give me a pm when the final version is out.
5/5 vote and 8/10 review.
Bye for now
well overall thanks a lot!!! on the review this was originally done and over with but you jus probably inspired me to do more with this song to make it better... pce and thanks
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.