I think overall it was pretty good but when at 0:22 i think some more drums sould come in a bit louder and the end shouldn't end so soon it shoulf like pick up into some like guitar. But ya overall it was pretty good.
I can;t really describe it but after hearing it it just sounds like it is missing something. It needs another melody or 2. Maybe mess around with the instruments. I don't think that the piano is the right instrument to be the main melody. Also it is a bit repetitive.
Well, I liked it.
Everything layered nicely and i found it overall enjoyable. Some of the piano seemed a little rhythmically detached at times.