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Author Comments

I made this last year, my junior year in high school.

My friend played the opening arpeggio and I fell in love with it.

I tried to paint soundscapes. I put in a little skit/interlude to enhance the feeling of film music.
Gimme some feedback please!

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For once I agree with all previous reviews

Certainly there are better gun effects available to you than that. I'll reinforce that because it would be such an easy fix. That being said, your use of the other environmental sound elements was spectacular though. The voice acting was obviously not professional- I'm thinking high school drama club. Gotta make the best of the materials at hand, though, so with that in mind I really can't take too much off for that.
All instruments seemed to be very well driven to convey the mood here. They even flowed smoothly with the environmentals, which is something that's really hard to score on. There were two times when things got out of hand though:
The transition at 0:59 seemed way out of tune.
And the rapidly repeated percussive sound that was used at 1:43 and elsewhere seemed too monotone for this work. Though the stereo panning with the effect kept it relatively interesting.
Very fine work overall, despite the couple shortcomings. This one really stands out for me.


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Surdu responds:

Thanks, It's comments like these that really make posting on newgrounds worthwhile


Intense

You can definitely feel the emotion. Might need some refinement, though.


Surdu responds:

tis true


pretty nice

Improve the background in the begining. the gun ( i think) sounds too fake. other than that, it's pretty well done.


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Credits & Info

Surdu
Author

Listens
599
Downloads
74
Votes
27
Score
3.94 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 1, 2009
5:05 PM EST
Genre
Industrial
File Info
Song
3.6 MB
4 min 0 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.