Cool beats! I like it but its really short and I'm sure you could add something very cool to this song.I know that with a demo It's hard.You have more experience in the music than me so I can't help very much but I know that you put lot of efforts to it so I voted you 5.
lol you're so kind, but yea you didnt need to vote a 5 on this. i admit its crap, cuz its my early work, if you'd like to review some of my latest work...lets say 'Technology', a vote of 5 could really help. im definatly checking some of your stuff out.