Two words.... Holy Shit!
You seriously have amazing technique. I can only wish I had this technique.
some cool lyrics
hey man i came up with some lyrics. these are off the top of my head so they probably ain't that good.
READY TO DIE!
hold my head under!
dieing is the pleasure of living
under the water of the rising tides i shall be set FREE!!!
leave my dreams behind for a world nothingness, pitch black with no one to critisize.
killing the dead will be my final task
marching back and forth with the pitch fork of death, mutilating the living dead.
END MY LIFE!
Woo, that's awesome if you recorded it when you were 14, really there are some great riff and it was well played. Good job with the drums, the double was sometime a bit off tempo, but it's still nice. That break at 0:18 was so tasty, fucking enjoyable :D.
You said that a friend of your play the drums and another played the second guitar but what about the bass? There is a bass and it's obvious (1:42), so who played it? lmao - Sorry, I'm being a bitch ;P. Well done overall, you get my five!
I wrote it at 14, I recorded it at my current age of 15 :P Theres only so much you can do with the drums dude, the drummer (16) had not warmed up and was tired :P My friend (16) played second guitar (left) and I (15) played guitar (right) and bass. We're youngsters :P