This was very good
If you lowered the whisper noise under the vocals, this would be 100x better.
You have a unique sound for Newgrounds, that's for sure.
The vocals are a little messy. Overall, pretty neat.
Yeah, like you said, now that I listen back, the vocals are too loud.
Especially in the beginning. I'll have to work on that next time.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.