Reminded me of some 80s horror flick, or... an exorcist track.
You should always be careful when using those kind of bells. it can hurt the ears. Maybe use the bells on a lower octave and not as much. Or replace it with a piano.
Play around with the strings more and use different sounds. Mix it around a but, I found it a little repetitive, especially in the first minute. This can sound much better if you take your time and most of all have fun with it.
i know. i know. i know...! but as i say in my text its far from finished and my computer simply cant handel it... if i try to changing it my computer almost freses up... i cant do anything more as it is.. i only made the different parts that was the only thing i was capabel of hearing the setup and a little of the effectes was made as i think it shuld be cus u couldent hear it..
btw its ment to be a little horror movie like cus im stil trying to do as many different kinds of music as i can overcome. so ofcurse some will be good and others will be partly failuers..
but i like the melodi in this track and i wanted to play around with the repedetive part and i liked the result therfor did i upload it cus maby others could see that to... i had to uplode it as a unfinished project cus of the reason i mentioned up there...
and i like the bell synth.. ill maybe lower the volume a bit and make the sound a little less sharp so its not damaging anyone BUT i wont make it a piano.. up till now i almost use a piano in all my tracks and this was also a try to not doing that.
and the bell matches the rest pretty well (if u ask me that is)..
and i only make music for the fun so u dont have to worrie abaut that XD
sorry for the insane long response i ended up doing o_O
and thanks for the review.. i like reviews eaven if its bad scores aslong they have a desent reason to give the low amaunt of points.. and u do...