It has potential.
Its a good start. Of course it has room for improvement. The quality is a bit low and the tune is good but could be better with some different instruments. The lyrics are pretty good as far as I could tell. It has a lot of potential and could go far with further revisions. But, enough said. Good Work. Keep it up and I expect to see more later on and for this to be completed.
thank you very much for takeing the time to write me a review