Hey what sup guys. Just thought id put this up because i just finished the lyrics and the composition to it. I wanted to see how bad you would thrash it. lol i know the vocals are off but this is the first time i did this song start to finish no stops. Be harsh, o and theres alot of metal rawr in it im just in a place where i cant be loud. Ill get a whole band recroding soon when i get these vocals down.
Peace
It has potential.
Its a good start. Of course it has room for improvement. The quality is a bit low and the tune is good but could be better with some different instruments. The lyrics are pretty good as far as I could tell. It has a lot of potential and could go far with further revisions. But, enough said. Good Work. Keep it up and I expect to see more later on and for this to be completed.
thank you very much for takeing the time to write me a review
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
DJRevenge 
