Overall, a good piece.

However, if it had a melody, it would be amazing. Preferably lots of brass and very aggressive strings. THAT would propel this song to amazing heights.

Percussion is amazing, although it does seem offbeat sometimes.

Furthermore, it gets too noisy sometimes.

Lastly, the compressor seems a little weird. That needs to be improved.

Nice

Good, and certainly only a minute, it couldn't have gone on for longer i don't think.
unless you had a melody.
SA

Good.

Pretty intense song, while a little crouded I think the instruments added to the feeling of this piece. Keep up the good work.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Not all tracks need a melody...

...and this one works pretty well without one. Awesome percussion man!

It probably doesn't work so well as a theme for night combat - the sounds you've got in here make me think more of a chase in an industrial zone or mecha combat. Lots of machinery, tight quarters, everything bearing down on you.

Good

This wasnt too too bad, I liked the percussion in this and I just wish there was a more strong brass presence section in there.