ouch

well not bad, its just not very interesting too me, im not a fan of the hiphop art
(naturally that wont affect my sense of judgement)

the intro is quite nice, but long, and a bit boring..
after that comes a part with false simplistic piano play, just really surreal..

i cant really put any interest in this, but its not dramatic or anything, at least it has structure and some form of variation..
not a bad try!