This as an amazing piece. Just the clock effect was really crappy and annoying it ruined the song. I know you wanted it because ur telling a story but it ruins the song. This is an outstanding peice without it. Its so complex its like Baba o Reily in the beginning. Anyways awesome song man keep it up. 5/5 10/10 i think this should be best of the week if you remove that clock effect.