Very nice work...
If this is only your first piece then I think you have excellent potential. The bass had a nice rythim and gave the song a nice flow. Four seconds in, the synthisimic, piano sound gave a nice back ground to the bass, and the rest of the song. The drums gave a nice powerful, and nice rythimic pattern in your song. Eight seconds in you added the trumpet, it was a nice riff to give that dancing, jiving feeling I presume.
The only downfall was that when you added the other trumpet it felt as though you just shot the song into a different flow. Now it was a nice idea, but I think most musicians tend to do that, even I do that, but when you add that trumpet, try to make it flow with the first trumpet.
If you have any questions, just message me on my account. I'll be happy to answer them.
ok.. ill take your advice on my 3rd song :D
thanks for the review