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| LK | Sensation

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This is my first Full song. and i think its my best song yet. I hope you think so too so please review and rate fairly. Tell me if anything is wrong and also how to improve it because i really think this one has potential. Also please put the volume up. Its better when the volume is higher. Also i just heard it again for some reason it doesn't sound as good as it did in Fl. So ill let you decide if you think this is my best work yet.


o shiit

great, this is amazing, all of your songs are bookmarked on my favz. i am definetly showing this to rodney (music director) i make music too you know

LK412 responds:

Thank a lot! Glad you enjoyed!


I agree with Indiedance that mastering would be a good idea. Cuz yea, I can also hear at some points later on in the song when the melody is drowned out by the bass.
Buuut overall I agree with the potential, and most of it is already there. Most of the song was definitely bumpin'.
So hella good job 5/5


Good rytham and beat man.

nice work

good, but i think the song looses its "feel" i guess at like 1:05 because its WAYY too loud.

because all your sounds are coming together, you gotta have flow. like just make it an arp? strings kick and stuff.

like same thing again at 1:45, i can really only hear your bass=\. and then those claps make it sounds ridiculously ahhhh i wana hear em xD

you gotta work on mastering, which is the art of making ALL of your sounds audible, instead of just packing them onto each other making a loud mess.

but you got lucky =] ur "mess" actually sounded pretty decent. but this could be a LOT LOT LOT better.

im giving u a 8, but really like a 8.5, which is like a 9.

so you get a 5/5 =]

keep it up!

- AriA

LK412 responds:

I really wanna learn how to master but i just get lazy and dont wanna go look up a tutorial. I guess im gonna have to if i want to make good songs. Thanks for the review man.

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Credits & Info


2.84 / 5.00

Dec 24, 2008
8:57 PM EST
File Info
3.8 MB
2 min 24 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.