effort's def there
but just doesn't sound good. not being a dick. just work on that shit man
Cool ideas, loved the string riding.
The guitar is way to muddy, maybe you like it that way, just my personal opinion. cut down on the distortion a bit :D
Also the timing is a little off (especially at the part starting at 0:17).
A big tip from me personally for getting a great guitar tone:
Record the rhythm guitar twice, pan one guitar left, and the other guitar right. You will get a rich and killer sound like that. Leaving the lead guitar in the center will give it the effect you (i think) wanted to reach at 0:50, where the rhythm sporadically comes in...
One last one: Give that EZDrummer bassdrum some punch! it's completely drowning in the mix!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.