Cool

A tad repititive for me, it could have fallen into something different after a few bars but its your tune. I agree with the lacking of the bass and drums could use some tweaking. Just do some level tweaking and it should sound alot better. GJ dude!

-Jon

Nice Work

Like mentioned before, the drums weren't great and could use some looking at..

I liked the intro, it reminded my of a few metallica beginnings where they switch straight into distorted heavy :D Which catches my attention but it never hurts to add a bit more distortian for a piece like this.

I agree with Gravey, Bass could of been a little more noticed.. I enjoyed listening to the solo, it went well with the rest of the song.

I could see some lyrics towards this but they would have to be carefully made or they might just ruin the song x)

8/10
4/5 because of the lost bass after intro & drums

Nice. :)
~TunedEmotion

YOU RE RECORDED THIS!!

thank you!

i didnt think the original could get better
but i was wrong....obviously

THIS IS WHAT I LIKE!

NOTHING TO SAY!

Okay...

I'm listening at the song right now...

Good intro. Interesting starts are always good...
But what's this!? The song suddenly burst out in flames and jut pownerize!
Then some heavier guitar riffs come in and I faint of awesomeness.

Very good, a fast beat, leet drums and perfect guitar riffs is all I can ask for. Keep it going and watch out for ninjas. *sob sob* So fucking great... *sniff*

:D