It Sounds Good 2 Me
I really like it!!!! Its different don't be the same keep making more good music
Sounds test piece-ish
You've got some decent ideas going about, and it does have a cheery pop feel, but it's kind of rough around the edges. The intro part felt kind of weird since it's in a different tempo/rhythm, and the transition into the first part is kind of abrupt - as are some of the transitions from section to the section. They feel somewhat connected due to having same chord progression, but other aspects such as melody and rhythm make it feel discontinuous.
Thank you for the advice
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