..but there's that one soft ambient in the backround that I beleive isn't yours, although I'm having some trouble finding the song (I have over 700, all from NG), so I guess I can't prove it. Anyway overall it was an OK song, I liked all the guitars. The whole thing just wasn't cool when the soft ambient thing started to play, it sort of just fell apart. The guitars were a bit repetative. My suggestions are: make some new guitar loops, rid the song of the ambient in the backround, and add some other instruments, maybe some drums would be cool. Good job, hope you make more and improve.
Thanks for the review. I am really newbish at this. I have started a new song, and I am writing everything. You are right, the ambiant sound in the back isn't mine, it is a loop. The new song i am working on is actually eventually going to be a complete project, although i can't submit the whole song to newgrounds becouse of there size restrictions, i will submit pieces. The only piece i have is the BETA of the beginning. I have put in a crappy intro, and an even crappier ending. It is a BETA though, so it is alright.
It sounds nice...
...but It left me wondering what parts of this u actually wrote and what parts are just nice samples you've found and put together. If u wrote the parts then pls excuse my afore mentioned comments, as this is a clean and nice sounding tune.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.