u could have used a diffrent kick/snare drum in the b ground it doesnt fit vary well. and perhaps a flute or something.
I think that you rocked the house with this one but it needs a little mor feness to i cant say what it is for shoure but it feels as if there should be a nother insterment in the peace pearhaps some sort of woodwind interstment with a melody line.
Well other that that i tink its a veary good preformence.
(n_n) best of luck
P.S egnore the guy below me he has no clue what he likes.
get that away from me. bleh!