I think this is ok But For One I think you need a harder beat and second I think you need a way more powerful bass.
I think the song has a pretty good feeling to it just a bit to repetitive for me.
That one note at 2:36 is way off beat. just letting you know!
overall nice work.
H a v e A G r e a t D a y ! !
thanks for the review... that 2:36 chord you hear is a Bbmin13#11 (Bb, F, F#, e--with the ambiguity of no 3rd). the tension serves a purpose--the #11 of that chord, E (instead of Eb), is that 'off-tune' note (not 'off-beat'--as in time)--is supposed to be there to grab your attention. it's a piquant harmony sometimes used in jazz.
a harder beat and more aggressive bassline would change the character of the piece entirely; something i could possibly explore, but as of now, i think anything harder would detract from the sparse piano line that's supposed to roll in and out.
anyhow, thank you again for the decent review. :)
I'm liking the transitions and progressions in the piece; the lead-in to the DnB part was nicely done, and didn't feel like you just jumped from an ambient piece to a DnB piece. Also, Interesting piano sound; actually kinda sounded like a clean guitar until you hit that high note. But I think it felt a bit too repetitive compared to the other stuff, so maybe you should add an alternate riff for it?
aww thank you, mate. glad you enjoyed! i literally wrote this a couple of hours ago, so... if i write an additional piano riff to follow that one, perhaps then i'll redo this... i think that the quirky high 'e' note is my favourite, hehe. ;P
but thank you again for the kind words.
Not realy my likeing but cool stuff